The Word of God on the Lips of Children
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"Mother is the word of God on the lips of children" - The Crow
Conception was a whisper
coldly let loose
without a thought
or
a care
never knowing
never the matter
of consequences
that may come
to those that you left behind yourself
while you paraded
we pretended
that we didnt hate life
or
that you even loved us
or
even cared
for us
a little
maybe
its better
this way
rather than
that way
but do you
even care
even yet
or was my unnatural spawning
my snagging
if you will
of the
coil of mortality
the end
of your good times
never the matter
tis more education
more and more
but
here is the kicker
the little gift
that keeps me going
that fire that pushes me on
is that
even though you tried
oh so very hard
to destroy
what was
a semblance of a youth
you failed
I am here
and
better still
I am stronger
and wiser
than you
could ever have been.
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You have great artistic insights.
This only the 2nd hub I have read by you, both of them
drew me right in, and I was "compelled" to read more.
Such triumph at the end here. It moves me. It speaks to so many situations in life. I have taken care of foster children, and it is all about letting them know that despite everything they are strong, they survived; and that they can make their here and now, and tomorrow.










ltfawkes 19 months ago
Hi, greengypsywolf. These lines:
even though you tried
oh so very hard
to destroy
what was
a semblance of a youth
you failed
I am here
are chilling. Whether you're writing about a political struggle or a personal one (what ARE you writing about?) this is a very powerful poem. And the painting of the gallows in the rain froze me to the spot.
Nice work. I want to read more.
L.T.